Friday, February 12, 2010

Feedback on Headlines

Chapstick Headlines Round3 Peralez

1 comment:

  1. mireya,

    headline #1 is the best. (I added the word "the")
    ("before you get a second kiss, you need to get to the first."

    headline #2 is quick and to the point.

    for headline #3, I voting for: "the goal is to reel her in, not send her running." (making a good first impression is a core truth that everyone can relate to,)

    nice job....now you need to start thumbnailing some coolio layouts.

    david

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