Gorilla Glue I love the concept. "Dont use your nuts" haha. I'm not sure what it needs, maybe the product shot should be smaller, its kinda jabbing it's way into the ad, idk.
Norelco is funny, ha. If it looked like the animals were like caught in the act like someone opened the curtain on them, would be hilarious.
I think you should work on Threadless first. I like the "abstract" and the "tagging" visuals, however the layouts are too basic right now. You should explore at least a dozen different layouts as well as typography choices. Also, the bodycopy is too long. Where is the 3rd ad? Brainstorm up more ideas for the 3rd execution.
Delanie, Norelco rocks. Such a smart and engaging idea. Has so many legs. Nice work. I agree with David on Threadless. This is your weakest campaign currently. -Jon
Gorilla Glue I love the concept. "Dont use your nuts" haha. I'm not sure what it needs, maybe the product shot should be smaller, its kinda jabbing it's way into the ad, idk.
ReplyDeleteNorelco is funny, ha. If it looked like the animals were like caught in the act like someone opened the curtain on them, would be hilarious.
I think you should work on Threadless first. I like the "abstract" and the "tagging" visuals, however the layouts are too basic right now. You should explore at least a dozen different layouts as well as typography choices.
ReplyDeleteAlso, the bodycopy is too long. Where is the 3rd ad? Brainstorm up more ideas for the 3rd execution.
Delanie, Norelco rocks. Such a smart and engaging idea. Has so many legs. Nice work. I agree with David on Threadless. This is your weakest campaign currently. -Jon
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